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Duped Into Believing by ~darkestpoetrylover:icondarkestpoetrylover:



I stand, watching life roll by,
Walking dejectedly under a grey sky.
I know I never should have believed such a lie,
Yet I had no choice, did I?

Sure, they say kind words of joy,
But, honestly, they manipulate you like a toy.
Yet, though they seem so coy,
All they want to do is lie to an innocent boy.

Even though they say tomorrow will be another good day,
Tomorrow is just another day to believe the lies they say.
So sure, I’ve been lied to in every way,
But I can hardly stand not to stay.

What is the problem with their words that make you fall?
Their evil sentences, lies all!
Words that make a cage that I appall,
Words that stop me as effectively as a wall.

The Earth can be a miserable place,
When evil is masked under every human face.
What is wrong with this godforsaken race?
Progressing towards death at a ridiculous pace?
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wirtten for the challenge detailedilluision gave me. lies, the earth is good at those.

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*detailedillusion:icondetailedillusion: May 17, 2008, 9:13:19 AM
I actually really like this, one of your best, perhaps you should continue in this field? Just a suggestion:) Thank you, and well done
~Thetrainingartist:iconThetrainingartist: May 17, 2008, 11:24:13 AM
Very nice. Speaking alot of truth too. =(

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~darkestpoetrylover:icondarkestpoetrylover: May 17, 2008, 11:50:05 AM
the world isn't all bad, but yet.......the world has so many lies in it....
thanks

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"Rent-a-Poet" still in use for all of this month. make sure to drop any poet ideas by me!

A bookstore is a heaven for those of us writing nerds.
I'm poetically and Roman inclined along with my grim, dark, and logical obsessions =)
Falling is fun!
~darkestpoetrylover:icondarkestpoetrylover: May 17, 2008, 11:58:13 AM
you're welcome. it was a pain in the butt getting every stanza to have the same rhyme, but i like this one too. i'm glad you gave me the challenge

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"Rent-a-Poet" still in use for all of this month. make sure to drop any poet ideas by me!

A bookstore is a heaven for those of us writing nerds.
I'm poetically and Roman inclined along with my grim, dark, and logical obsessions =)
Falling is fun!
~darkestpoetrylover:icondarkestpoetrylover: May 17, 2008, 12:13:22 PM
thanks

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"Rent-a-Poet" still in use for all of this month. make sure to drop any poet ideas by me!

A bookstore is a heaven for those of us writing nerds.
I'm poetically and Roman inclined along with my grim, dark, and logical obsessions =)
Falling is fun!
~strangeXII:iconstrangeXII: May 17, 2008, 12:21:12 PM
No problem! Did you get around to looking at that poem yet?
~darkestpoetrylover:icondarkestpoetrylover: May 17, 2008, 12:22:30 PM
whta poem? i still have 82 deviations to look at, even after deleting every tenth one. i'll be sure to get around to it though, since i'm going to be on a lot today.

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"Rent-a-Poet" still in use for all of this month. make sure to drop any poet ideas by me!

A bookstore is a heaven for those of us writing nerds.
I'm poetically and Roman inclined along with my grim, dark, and logical obsessions =)
Falling is fun!
~strangeXII:iconstrangeXII: May 17, 2008, 12:24:47 PM
Ok, I guess you forgot [link]