| This is the first portion my novel-in-progress. Any feedback/critique/opinions would be appreciated. |
| This is the first portion my novel-in-progress. Any feedback/critique/opinions would be appreciated. |


BrotherNow the door is open, waiting- Cheap ink preserved on worthless foreign paper- The stairs are listening intently, expectant- His colours have been once again pressed and aired- Logs in the hearth &nbsBrother


Tainted BloodI bleed words from my veins The knife beside me stained With lines of hopeless hope. Inky blemishes spread across my skin Transforming me into a demon of writtenTainted Blood
Words. Words.
Words. Always words, always lines, Line after line marching away Into the bleak horizon of
A page that is soiled By my hand, by my touch. Love, hate, sorrow, contempt, Every emotion mankind has ever known All bleeding in a black torrent Of stinging fire that sets the page alight Reducing it to charred ashes, That are soon scattered on the wind Of my taint
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I often has to deal with myself, which is pretty hard core, because myself's picky, selfish, mean, and always seems to get in the way of things that I wants to do. And then there's me. Me is so stupid, that me can't even make a correct sentence. Get it?
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Have a very good day fellow artist
(total steal)
,___,
[O.o] - Orly?
/)__)
-"--"-
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I often has to deal with myself, which is pretty hard core, because myself's picky, selfish, mean, and always seems to get in the way of things that I wants to do. And then there's me. Me is so stupid, that me can't even make a correct sentence. Get it?
--
Have a very good day fellow artist
(total steal)
,___,
[O.o] - Orly?
/)__)
-"--"-
--
I often has to deal with myself, which is pretty hard core, because myself's picky, selfish, mean, and always seems to get in the way of things that I wants to do. And then there's me. Me is so stupid, that me can't even make a correct sentence. Get it?
It was yesterday but I guess I'll be belated. xD
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The bend becomes the break.
geezes...
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Have a very good day fellow artist
(total steal)
,___,
[O.o] - Orly?
/)__)
-"--"-
--
The bend becomes the break.
--
Have a very good day fellow artist
(total steal)
,___,
[O.o] - Orly?
/)__)
-"--"-
--
The wonderful thing about Hawaii is, there, it doesn't take any words at all to say "I love you." You can say it with a pineapple and a twenty. -Vincent Price
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